Harmony Book Review

 

Book: Harmony
Author: Flash Kitterson
Pages: 247
Hard Core Scale: 1/4
Normal Scale: 3/10
Publish Date: 2022
About:  The girl Harmony has spent her whole life with her father taking special medicine. One day she stops and with it comes the voices and the powers when all she wanted was a best friend and find out what happened to her mom.

Review:
Was pulled and returned to Amazon after a manuscript splice at my door. Powerful ideas shimmer under the surface. Yet they become marred in potholes and odd decisions. There is a lack of purpose in the work elements spiraling out from world design and setting problems. Plenty of growing room in the simple style. Nothing in the work goes anywhere worthwhile with sequel in tow.  It was not ready. Lots of learning with a first book and that is what it is. Still Kudos and onward gallant youth.    

 

                                                Harmony Cover, copy Right Flash Kitterson.
 

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